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现在,许多中学生做作业时经常上网搜索答案,《21世纪报》就此话题展开征文比赛,请你根据以下表格内容写一篇英语文章,向报社投稿。1. Reasonspressure; homew


时间: 2017-3-21 分类: 作业习题  【来自ip: 18.199.175.25 的 热心网友 咨询】
 问题补充 现在,许多中学生做作业时经常上网搜索答案,《21世纪报》就此话题展开征文比赛,请你根据以下表格内容写一篇英语文章,向报社投稿。
1. Reasons
pressure; homework…
2. Advantages
save time; solve problems…
3. Disadvantages
lose the ability; …
4. Opinions and suggestions

注意:1.内容应包括表格中列出的要点;可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.词数100左右;
3.开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Nowadays, many students often go on line to search for answers to their homework.     
    
    
    
    Nowadays, many students often go on line to search for answers to their homework. That is because students are under heavy pressure of study and they have too much homework to do. Worse still, some of the problems are too difficult to solve. As a result, they turn to the Internet for help. 

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(答案→)Nowadays, many students often go on line to search for answers to their homework. That is because students are under heavy pressure of study and they have too much homework to do. Worse still, some of the problems are too difficult to solve. As a result, they turn to the Internet for help.
解析:题目属于表格类材料作文。题目要求根据表格所给信息写一篇英语文章,作文应涵盖所有要点。第一部分叙述出现这种情况的原因,第二部分写有点和缺点;第三部分给出自己的观点和建议。写作时使用第一人称,注意标点、拼写、时态、语态和语法知识的正确使用。注意作文的条理性,内容要充实,描述现象要客观。注意词数限制。
亮点说明:范文注意使用Nowadays, Worse still, As a result, However, To start with, Besides, In my opinion, For example, Meanwhile等来衔接上下文,很好地做到了语意连贯、衔接紧凑;范文使用To start with, Besides进行列举,比firstly, secondly更有新意;
范文使用了较多短语和固定搭配:search for, turn to the Internet for help, depend heavily on the Internet, realize the importance of finishing homework independently, try to, build up, communicate with等,使文章内容充实;
范文使用了一些重要的语法知识:表语从句That is because students are under heavy pressure of study;固定句型too difficult to solve, find it convenient to surf the Internet for accurate answers, not only the ability to solve problems but also their interest in study;定语从句which saves them a lot of time;非谓语动词asking them to reduce the amount of homework等,语法知识掌握很扎实;
measures should be taken to solve the problem这句是写作常用的好句子,也可以用only when...+倒装来作为结尾。
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